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Post  Ian Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:17 am

My Writing Showcase of all that I've written. I'll update them as I come up with new stuff, and I'll also be working on a story's, rant's, and personal quotes.

Table of contents:
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Poem 1: Darkened Heart, Forever Given.
Poem 2: My Drive.
Poem 3: Betrayal.
Poem 4: Heart.
Poem 5: Forever My Heart.
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Rant 1: Rock, Paper, Scissor.
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Story Section:(Coming soon)
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Personal Quotes Section:(Coming soon)
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Well be updated when new poems come to mind.
There are links to all the first topics I make for them on Naruto-Boards.com before each poem.
Also, I'll br trying to get banners as soon as I can, so this doesn't look so dull.


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"Poems."
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Poem One: Darkened Heart, Forever Given.

"As my dark blood crawls down the steps of god,
my soul cry's for the heart it needs.
As it prays to be with thou,
it can only hope, pursue, and show it's guiding love from the shadow of the lord thy trusts at heart.

May the soul one day find,
that thou truely is near,
never away from thous side.
Caring for thou,
for all time and beyond."


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Poem Two: My Drive.

"Love is what it is,
driving me to think of you.
Knowing that you're there,
makes the pain worth thou's heart.

Thought's what makes the feeling,
That starts this drive for thou.
What it is, is what I feel, the love, that's what it is."


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Poem Three: Betrayal.

"Face it, the shadow lost in heart.
That thou fears, or reveres.
Betrayal, from what it shadows,
lost in hate.

Forgotten, given from death,
started from trust.
Lost in belief, I've given in hope.

What creates it, this feeling we fear?
The shadow, lurking from above,
lost in the trust, given from hope.
Can it be said, to show this form,
lost by some, powered by most?"


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Poem Four: Heart.

From what it shows,
to what it takes.
Hiding it, only brakes.
My love is simple,
yet complex.
Making it bend and flex.

As you hold me,
so tight and content.
Wishing for more,
makes me regret,
all the mistakes,
that fall into depress.


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Poem Five: Forever My Heart.

"This heart, this feeling.
It calls for only one.
Acing when your gone,
loving from afar.
My thoughts never stop showing me,
this image of her shining beauty.
Holding her arms,
forever holding my heart.
She's calls to, my heart,
as meant to be the part of her,
without ajar, giving in content.
It means something,
that beauty I hear.
Calling out for love,
as she ever draws near.
My heart in content,
beyond consent,
holding itself forever contempt.
It waits for her, my heart,
within this repent.
I yearn for it,
my hearts desire.
The one who calls, f
orever in reach.
I come to her,
this shine, this angel,
giving my all, my heart, my love."


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"Rant's."
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Rant One: Rock, Paper, Scissors.

"I can understand how scissors beats paper, but there's no fucking way paper can beat rock. Is paper supposed to magically wrap around the rock and immobile it? Why the hell can't paper do this to scissors? Screw scissors why the hell can't paper do this to people? Why aren't sheets of college notebook paper constantly suffocating college students as they take notes in class? I'll tell you why, because paper can't beat any body. A rock would tear that shit up in two seconds. When I play Rock, Paper, Scissors, I always play rock, and when someone claims to beat me with paper, I punch them in the face with my already clenched fist and say. "Oh, I'm sorry. I thought paper would protect you asshole."

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"Story's."
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Coming soon...
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"Personal Quotes."
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Coming soon...
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Post  Admin Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:56 pm

Awesome,good job Ian ;]
Can't wait for the clan poem.
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Post  Ian Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:43 am

Updated with my newest poem, Heart.

Also, thanks Eva. Keep looking by here for more, lol.
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Post  Admin Fri Jan 15, 2010 2:31 pm

New poem is lovely.

And I will ;D
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Post  UltraFlamez Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:07 am

Great set of Poems
Keep up the Good Work.
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Post  Ian Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:25 pm

Updated with links to all the topics for the current poems on NB. Not gonna lie, bitch to do. This will also become a all out "writing" showcase. Since I'm going to try and make some small story's.
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Post  Ian Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:23 pm

~Buuuuuump~

Added a new poem. This one is for my girl friend, Cary.
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Post  Admin Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:24 pm

Nice poem,but it has some typos.
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Post  Ian Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:33 am

Lol, typo fixed. There's only one typo so. D:

Also, now added the link to the page I posted it on NB.
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Post  Admin Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:04 am

There's actually two more, it's 'Aching' not 'Acing' and 'She' not 'She's'
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Post  UltraFlamez Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:58 am

Admin wrote:There's actually two more, it's 'Aching' not 'Acing' and 'She' not 'She's'
lol.
I tink i should start posting poems.
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Post  Admin Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:58 am

I should make a poem,seeing as I suck at 'em
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Post  UltraFlamez Tue Feb 16, 2010 3:19 am

Admin wrote:I should make a poem,seeing as I suck at 'em
I think English is one of the hardest subjects ever.
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Post  Ian Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:52 am

So, are you nigga's like, spamming my poem showcase? =S
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Post  Admin Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:22 pm

Ian wrote:So, are you nigga's like, spamming my poem showcase? =S
pshh,no.
We're ninjaing your poem showcase.
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Post  Ian Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:47 pm

Admin wrote:
Ian wrote:So, are you nigga's like, spamming my poem showcase? =S
pshh,no.
We're ninjaing your poem showcase.
Pfft, you can try.
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Post  Admin Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:12 pm

Ian wrote:
Admin wrote:
Ian wrote:So, are you nigga's like, spamming my poem showcase? =S
pshh,no.
We're ninjaing your poem showcase.
Pfft, you can try.
Pfft,we already did.
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Post  Ian Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:28 am

The whole showcase is now edited, reworked, and now just a flat out writing showcase. Meaning more then poems. o.o
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